Three things we could improve upon from our children's film are:
1. Camerawork - we did not include a variety of shots, angles or movements in our opening which would have made viewing a lot more interesting for the viewer. We should have used a shot list to plan our camerawork more carefully.
2. The script - we did not write or rehearse the script ahead of time, so it was quite poor.
3. Sound - we focused so much on the mise en scene of our film that the sound suffered and the music did not fit in well with the plot.
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